In Urmis literacy we have been writing explanations. We all wrote an explanation about why it is important to spend time outside, I made a goal at the start of writing the explanation that I would finish it all in one day, I achieved my goal by sitting next to someone who can help me and by sitting away from my friends. Next time I am going to try to focus on flow more because I found my explanation at first didn’t flow. I think I have advanced writing because I give a clear and detailed explanation that shows strong understanding. My ideas flow smoothly with clear connections. I use precise and interesting topic of language and I use a range of linking and non linking words. I use a variety of sentence types like simple, compound and complex and I use them well to make my writing more then complex. I also use a range of punctuation, I use scientific words. And finally I guide my reader clearly and I made the explanation easy to read and follow. Have you ever written an explanation? Here is my explanation,
Why is it important to spend time outside?
Introduction:
- To have a happy and social life
Have you ever been walking on the beach and wondered what are the benefits of going outside and what would happen if we stayed inside. Going outside is very important because nature keeps people healthy and fit but it also helps get kids and adults off devices so they can go play outside or go exercise in the wildlife. Going outside in nature also helps people make friends and have a social and happy life outdoors with wildlife and bugs like ladybugs, grasshoppers and more. And it teaches nature’s science experience for children to have fun and learn in the outdoors.
Firstly, spending time outdoors means you can socialise and connect with other people, and going outdoors in the fresh air can lead to making new friends from different cultures and countries. Going outside also gives you a happy life because outdoors has fresh air and has new wildlife to explore and to learn about. Also going for 1 walk a day can lead you to making so many more friends.
Secondly, leaving the house for a walk or even sitting outside can keep us fit and healthy because the vitamin D in the air keeps us from suffering rickets, or in severe cases it can cause growth problems, muscle weakening or even brain damage. The vitamin D in the sun is very important to live a happy and healthy life.
Therefore, going outdoors can get adults or children devices like phones, tablets, ipads, computers or even game consoles. Going outside helps children’s brain development work properly and helps them so they don’t go on screens all day long. Something like going on a trampoline or even playing a sport like football, netball, basketball, rugby league, gymnastics or volleyball can keep kids from going on screens all day long.
In conclusion, going outside is a great thing to do and the sun’s vitamin D is very important for human life and mental health. So next time you are feeling bored at home go for a walk around outside.